Unity: Project Lancet

Quick update today.  I've been getting some feedback from people - thanks to everyone for that.  One of the main things I've discovered is that the working title I had for my story - Try Not to Die, doesn't really grab hold.  It's an interesting problem - I've created this whole universe, but there's no way to tie that into a title like that.  So my wife was kind enough to let me bounce some ideas off her, and the one that stuck is now the new title of my book.

Naturally, Project Lancet is something that's revealed later on in the story - for good reason.  I don't want to be giving away my secrets too early.

Anyhow, here's the updated preview, which you can comment on while reading.  Thank you Google Docs for being so awesome.

And thanks for reading!